Highest level of education of women in Someland

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 with answer.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below give information on the highest level of education of women in Someland 1945 and 1995.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.

You should write at least 150 words.

Education of women

Sample Answer:
The given pie charts compare the women’s top education level in two different years, 1945 and 1995, in Someland. As is presented in the given illustration, Someland’s women did a remarkable progress in education in 1995 than that of 1945.

According to the given illustration, the highest level of education among women in Someland has a far worse situation than that of 1995. In 1945, 35% women in Someland had no schooling while 35% had only upto third grade education. 15% of those women went to school and completed 6 year education while 10% finished schools up to 9 years. 12 year education was completed only by 4% women in this year while only 1% completed first degree. No women in this year in Someland finished their post graduation.

On the other hand, the highest education level among women in Someland improved significantly with 50% first degree holders and 20% post graduates and 20% 12 years degree holders. The percentage of Someland’s women who did not complete school education reduced dramatically in this year and this is a sure sign of improved women education in Someland.