Number of visits to two new music sites on the web

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Number of visits to two new music sites on the web

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 with answer.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

Visits to two new music sites

Sample Answer:
The illustrations compares the visit to two new music websites for fifteen days measuring them in thousands. Overall, the surfer of Pop Parade website got higher visitors than that of Music Choice but the later one received more visitors on 12th and 13th days.

According to the line graph, pop Parade music website had about 120 thousand visitors on day 1 and that was almost thrice than the visitors’ of Music Choice website who received only 40 thousand visitors on the same day. There were many fluctuations in the number of visitors these two music websites received and Pop Parade’s highest number of visitors came on day 15 which was over 165 thousand. They received the lowest visitors on day 7 (approximately 35 thousand).

On the other hand, Music Choice received their highest listeners on day 14 (over 120 thousand visitors) and their lowest visitor count was on day 2nd and 4th (only twenty thousand). On day 7, and 8 the visitors of these two websites were almost same and these numbers were 20 and 40 thousand respectively. The Music choice received higher music surfer than Pop Parade on days 12and 13 while in all other days the later one received more visitors.

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