Women should be given the same work opportunities as men

//Women should be given the same work opportunities as men

Women should be given the same work opportunities as men

IELTS Writing Task 2 with sample answer.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe woman’s place is in the home, while others say that idea is outdated and that all women should be given the same work opportunities as men.

What is your opinion?

Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer:
Women play a major role in our society, as being a mother, sister or a wife, and also being a scientist, political leader and roles that a man can play. Women fulfill her duties and responsibilities very expertly, but still they are considered to be weak as compared to men who are more dominating gender in our society. Somehow women have made their place in the work place but still they are being treated like a feebler. In my opinion, they should be facilitated with job opportunity and have an equal place as men have.

There are many reasons why a woman should be given the same opportunities as men which are described in this essay. First of all, no one can deny the importance of freedom, women should not be dependent on her husband for financial assistance, and she should have some economic freedom. Secondly, there are more opportunities for women to learn at work place, for having more experience regarding people and life, and more chances to groom their personality and self-esteem as well and that is why women should be given opportunities to work besides men. Thirdly, working as professionals their decision making ability will improve as they will begin to think more logically and critically. This will have a positive impact on their family and personal life. They will also be able to take right decision for the future of their children. They can also learn the value of time and money for the betterment of economic condition. A nation cannot develop when half of its population is deprived from opportunities and this is the sole reason women empowerment is so vital in today’s world.

No doubt, there are some disadvantages when women will work equally with men in work places. First children of such working mothers will be ignored; physical, emotionally and socially, to some extent. Such children can be victim of isolation, low self-esteem and feeling of rejection. No one can take place of a mother; either it is day care center, nurse or relative supervision. Household responsibilities need more time and attention for a good and healthy life circle, which somewhere unheeded in the long run of employment.

However, with the balance of time management at home and work place, everything can be settled down. Woman should make more places at business work, in the running 21st century, which will bring a positive change in the society.

[ Written by – Sana Rehman ]
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2017-09-30T14:04:03+00:00 April 3rd, 2016|Categories: IELTS Writing Task 2|Tags: |0 Comments

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