IELTS Writing Task 2 with sample answer.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Model Answer:
Students’ bahaviour in schools is a serious problem in many countries and this is very negatively affecting the study environment and overall educational system in those countries. There are many different reasons for this issue and immediate solution of this issue is really important for overall progress in the education sector.
The way the students behave with their classmates, teachers and other staffs of the schools has a direct effect on the study environment and in recent days, the student’s attitude towards teachers and others has reached to an abhorrent situation. The political influence on some students and their direct involvement in politics is one of the main reasons of their unacceptable bahaviours and activities. Only a handful of political students are worsening the overall study environment of the school. The student politics should be refined and they should be inspired to work for the betterment of others, but not to show their muscle power.
The social changes, psychological degradation and lack of family bonding are some of the reasons that cause the students behave rudely and violently both in social and school environment. Children spend almost 5-6 years at home before attending schools and their morality, behaviours, attitude and other human characters are built up at that time. Considering this, the parents should always teach them the way they should behave.
The family background, powerful family, personal powers are three other reasons why students show improper attitudes at schools. Drug is another issue that might mislead many young people and put them in darkness. The government should make sure that the schools have proper environment to make sure the study to the students and the school authority should take some strict steps to wipe up the bad eggs from school if they hamper the school environment.
The teachers sometimes behave rudely in many countries and cruelly punish the students for silly reasons. That should not be the way of teaching and teachers should come forward to take the responsibilities to take care of the students as they for their own kids.
In conclusion, there is no single reason that has ruined the study environment and students’ behaviours in schools in many countries and a combines steps from parents, governments, students and school authority should be taken to address this pressing issue.